Hello bloggers during literacy, we have been learning about ww1 and so I wrote an information report about it it's very interesting and will give you a great start to learning about WW1
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, June 3, 2021
Whacky WW1 infomation report
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Hi Charlie my name is Devan and we have read about WW1. your writing is to gram and that make it hard to read next time highlight all of your writing and then ctrl c and go back to blog post and then ctrl V it in to your blog.
ReplyDeleteOk thanks Devan I will fix my coulor of the text.Thanks for the feedback.
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