Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 9, 2021
How can I be the best version of myself
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Hi my name is Devan and read throw your work and there needed some improvements on the back round cos it is very hard to read on the teamwork slides. can you maybe change the writing to black so it makes it is easier to read.
ReplyDeleteThanks for feedback ill do that for next blog
Deletesee you next blog
good job charlie. You are always the best version of your self. Was it fun how long did it take?
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