We were learning to write messages so we had to write to our teacher weather we should be aloud to have pets on public transport and I said No because of a lot of great reasons and they were I think pets shouldn't be able to travel on public transport because pets don't always need attention they just need to be tired out and you can leave them for at least and hour.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 26, 2021
my measage to my teacher
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.

this is though you basically persuaded me but in my opinion I think they should but well done.
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